“The first time you saw me, you handed me a glass of bubbly and
punched me in the face,” Alice
says. She turns to study her husband – if he is still her husband.
Jacob pauses in the act of doing nothing at all. “Nostalgia? You?
Shocking,” he says. “And anyway, I did not
punch you in the face. You took one sip and only bloody choked on it. I was
trying to give you a neighbourly thump.”
“More like a neighbourly hump, if I’d only known,” Alice says virtuously.
Jacob reaches out a hand to her, then stops, takes out his phone and
starts doing heaven knows what on it. She clenches the steering wheel, and
stares out at Kalka, the last town in the plains before the road climbs up to
the Himalayas. Life presses in hungrily on both
sides of the car. The rain has formed gullies, and there is garbage swimming
its way down – onion peel, soggy cabbage, Band-aid, a plastic bag of Amul Milk,
a half-dead lizard, hair scrunchies, a child’s pacifier, known locally and
succinctly as a “nipple,” a dirty sock, assorted life debris. continued...
Excerpt Two
He stares at her for a second, and frowns. The road is dark as they
head up out of Kalka, their headlights the only foggy beacons of life.
Visibility is fifteen feet. Around the curve, Alice sees approaching headlights and creeps
closer to the mountain. The approaching truckers skirt the edge of the road, a
millimeter or two shy of the sheer, mile-long drop to the valley below.
There is a traffic jam, truckers lined up. An orange-turbaned
trucker shouts to another driver who laughs into his beard. Alice catches that it is something about the
bearded man’s mother. Beard-man responds with a comment about the turbaned
man’s testicles. She inches forward, her foot aching on the brake. They pass a
banner advertising hotel rooms at Mountain Dawn View, where the rooms come with
a double-bed, clean towels, Star television, and tandoori chicken with
Kingfisher beer in the bar, “For the Savvy Customer.” continued...
These are two short excerpts from a very 'place-based' short story. A slightly different version of it was published in Inkspill Magazine http://www.inkspillmagazine.com/ in 2011.
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